Revision.

After reviewing my research paper, which was based on McDonald’s cheeseburgers, I realized I can further develop my three main points. I will further discuss with detailed information where exactly Lopez Foods Inc. get their meat supply from, the process the meat goes through and the distribution method. On my second paragraph I will get more details on how the meat gets stored, cooked, what are the temperatures and how it gets assembled. Also, I will broaden the nutrition facts. Lastly, I will go more in depth on what are the medical conditions and consequences of consuming McDonalds and talk about possible solutions to prevent them as well. It won’t be an easy task to accomplish but it isn’t impossible either.